Author’s note: Please allow me to interrupt our regularly scheduled programming with a pathetic attempt to discredit my heckling toddler… I have another installment of “Awkward Love” due, and I’ve already put it off once, but it’s best not to rush these things. And since I live in constant fear of running out of things to write about, I try to seize these little anecdotes when they present themselves… sometimes it works wonderfully, other times, not so much.
“Daddy? What’s your hair doing?” My 2 year old daughter, Maia, asked me.
“I just got my hair cut,” I told her, “do you like it?”
She frowned. Frowned! “You need your hat.”
As if I’m not self-conscious enough about my hair! …the little brat. I know it’s fallacious to ignore the message and attack the credibility of the messenger, but it’s not as if her hair is any great example of style. She has nothing but wispy hint of hair that floats around her head, except where glued down with jelly.
She wants to give me fashion advice!? She spends most of her time naked! And I’ve seen her dress herself… the horror! Whatever method she uses to choose her clothing is a complete mystery to me, I’ve seen an ensemble which included a Sunday dress, holey jeans, a polyester scarf from off one of her stuffed animals, my porkpie hat, and her sister’s snow boots. Somehow I don’t think she’s the person to tell me how to accessorize!
Maia’s trying to pretend it never happened now. Like she didn’t mean insult me… Hmmmphf! She’s jumping in my lap and asking me to read to her. She told me: “I love you Daddy!” I think we might be in an abusive cycle. But what to do? I pick up the book and tell her: “Just keep your frizzy little head out of my face while I’m reading.”

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February 20, 2008 at 8:23 pm
Adam
See what happens when you rush a story? Ugh, it’s awful! I should yank it back into “Draft” and polish it up, but I’m not sure it’s worth the effort.
This may be a new low for me. Not the disgracing of a toddler… though that’s not my most gentlemanly moment (I hope you all know it was totally a joke) …but the writing is horrid. I don’t know that this story is my absolute worst, but it has got to be down there. The paragraphs don’t transition smoothly, the ending is abrupt and forced. It chafes, having it here… I’ll probably delete it tomorrow, but for now, I’m going to bed.
February 20, 2008 at 9:42 pm
brilliant monster
if that’s what you think about *your* post, then you must have to scrape *my* writing off the bottoms of your shoes!
can you please advise me on how to make my blog private?
February 20, 2008 at 9:58 pm
crouching tigerlilly
Aw, I thought it was funny, and Maia’s hair is…um…yeah. It’s just so bad. And yours is so handsome! I did a good job on your cut this time, if I do say so myself
February 20, 2008 at 10:13 pm
moonbeammcqueen
No, no, this was beautiful and funny! No yanking back! It makes me want to hug Maia, jelly-hair and all.
February 21, 2008 at 9:14 am
gail
i enjoyed it very much….if this is your worst, do me a favor, don’t read anything i write.
February 21, 2008 at 10:25 am
Adam
Me - See what you’ve done? Not only have you posted a sub-perfect post, which is humbling enough, but you’re little self-effacing comment makes it appear you’re fishing for compliments too! Both about your hair, and about your writing… Badly done, man! Badly done.
Chey - I’ve never detected any hint of your blog on the bottoms of my shoes. As you mentioned in your last post, there has been some unsavory stuff on the bottom of my shoes, but we both know where that came from… I can still hear those stinky bastards quacking. -shudder-
Why on earth do you want to make your blog private? I’m afraid I don’t know how to do that with blogger… I’m a wordpress user, you see.
Brandy - Thanks for your support, and the haircut. It’s much appreciated.
Moonbeam - Thank you. I’ll have to leave it here now, y’all were too fast at noticing its presence. I need to be more quick & decisive next time.
Gail - I’ve been reading your writing for a couple weeks now, and have been enjoying it. Please ignore my self-attacking… I’m kind of a bastard, but only to myself. I don’t know why I was so put out about Maia, actually, seeing that I’m far more critical on myself than she.
February 21, 2008 at 11:45 pm
brilliant monster
i know it’s petty, but i just wanted it duly noted that i coined the phrase “jelly wisp” in march of 2006, in the duplex.
just sayin’.
February 22, 2008 at 9:00 pm
Adam
Absolutely! For the record:
JELLY WISP
©Cheyenne 2006
February 22, 2008 at 10:52 pm
Lucky
You should never delete this story! It’s great
February 22, 2008 at 11:35 pm
Brandy
Ok, but I BIRTHED the jelly wisp. So, I own the original copy.
February 22, 2008 at 11:36 pm
moonbeammcqueen
LOL @ the copyright. How’d you do that?
February 23, 2008 at 4:42 am
Allison
Rest assured, it worked this time.
Oh shoot. We get our own little heckles from our 2-year old daugther, but my favorite heckling tales come from my husband’s work. He is a counselor for young boys, and they will say anything. One time a boy asked him if he was wearing girls jeans. He wasn’t, but he’s never worn those jeans again.
February 23, 2008 at 8:17 am
Adam
Lucky - Hi! Thank you!
Brandy - You make the “birthing” out to be such a big deal! Please allow me to be an insensitive man for a second, but I’m basing this on YOUR testimony… I’ve been under the impression that your 1-hour labor with Maia, including the full ONE minute of pushing, has been the easiest part of her existence here on earth. Do correct me if I’m wrong… I need to get this right.
moonbeam - Uh oh… time for me to reveal my nerdiness… The action used in getting the © isn’t hard, the trick is remembering the codes. This is available amongst many “ANSI” characters, and you can create it when typing text by holding down your “ALT” button and then typing 0169 on your number pad on the right of the keyboard [it has to be on the number pad, if you use the top numbers it doesn't work, which usually makes this pretty tricky on a laptop].
When you let go of the “ALT” button, the © symbol will magically pop into place. There are several symbols which you can get this way that are pretty useful. See the link for a full list (I bookmark this page so that I don’t have to memorize these codes when I need them every few months)…
A few of the ones I use frequently:
ALT+0225 = á
ALT+0228 = ä
ALT+0233 = é
ALT+0237 = í
ALT+0243 = ó
ALT+0250 = ú
ALT+0252 = ü
ALT+0241 = ñ
ALT+0174 = ®
ALT+0153 = ™
BUT before I scare you away forever… you know what also works really well? Copy & Paste! In this case, just go to that link and highlight what you want, then simply copy it where ever you need!
You’re sorry you asked, aren’t you?
Allison - Hi! You’re quite right, the female toddler demographic generally holds nothing on the potential for cruelty from young boys. Though I must say, I think my little Maia takes the trophy hands-down from my 10 year old son. Though, I think that has to do more with his gentlemanliness than with her cruelty.
LOL about your husband! That’s downright mean. Did the kid ask him outright if they were girl’s jeans or is the “Footloose” insult that was used back in my day still going around? (“Hey! Those are nice jeans! …Do they make them for men?”)
February 23, 2008 at 8:51 am
Allison
It was an outright question
February 23, 2008 at 8:07 pm
moonbeammcqueen
No, I’m not sorry at all that I asked! I printing it out and stuck it on my monitor. Thanks!
February 23, 2008 at 8:08 pm
moonbeammcqueen
Um…I “printed” it out too.
February 24, 2008 at 10:27 am
Adam
Allison - Pity, I could almost have appreciated the kid’s wit if he’d been clever. An outright question is much more rude. Which I suppose is what the kid was aiming for, so I guess I ought to give him some credit for efficiently targeting his goal.
moonbeam - Oh cool, I’m glad I could help! I’m also glad that I’m not the only one who publishes permanent typos in other people’s comments! It’s a pity they don’t let us edit our own comments.